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Reviews for Tales of a Broken Society

By : Strailo
  • From ANON - Liz on April 22, 2008
    Aww. Fluff moment...

    I actually just read a story on this site that had both of them in the bath house... very cute... :)
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  • From ANON - Yume on April 22, 2008
    So far the stories seem great. My only problem is with chapter 12. It seems to me you got the Japanese bathing system a bit mixed up since it seems Kyouraku was in the bath when Ukitake was washing his hair. That would not happen. You're suppose to wash off/shower before jumping into the baths which is used for relaxation.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 21, 2008
    I didn't like the third installment of Byakuya/Ichigo so much...I wanted them to end happily ever after no hating each other. Besides Yumi is Ikkaku's boy toy. Both babies should have been by Byakuya....I'm sad.
    On the other hand, I like the Byakuya/Hana pairing also...But not as much as Bya/Ichi. Oh...How about a Ukitaki/Kaien...The lengths a Vice Captain goes through to satisfy his Captain. I have another request, Hisagi/Renji that would be totally hot...they get locked in the 6th division supply closet together courtesy of Byakuya & Ichigo. Just an Idea.
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  • From liz2008 on April 21, 2008
    please do a chapter with ukitake/ichigo having sex. please do another mpreg story with ichigo pregnant. please do a chapter where ichigo finds out his dad is an ex-soul reaper captain.

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  • From ANON - Liz on April 21, 2008
    OH..MY..GOD...

    Yumi and Ichi would be so cute together....

    Hmm... two kids from 2 different mates.... SO KAWAIII!!!

    And I will wait for the story.. thank you...
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  • From ANON - Liz on April 21, 2008
    Awwww... fluff!!!

    The Hana/Byakuya one was so sweet (Blushes)

    Can you make another Aizen/Ichigo one (they meet in the club)(Virgin Ichigo)? Please with sugar on top?
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  • From liz2008 on April 21, 2008
    thank you for doing this. can you do another mpreg story where byakuya hates ichigo but during a one night stand gets ichigo pregnant.
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  • From liz2008 on April 20, 2008
    please do a chapter where ichigo is pregnant with byakuya's child and doesn't tell him and goes home. that would be so funny and byakuya finds out.
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  • From Sajahi on April 20, 2008
    Keep up the excellent work and give us more!!!! More smut and more sap.... Bwahahahaha! Gimme.
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  • From ANON - Liz on April 20, 2008
    Sorry for not revi-HOLY SHIT (NOSEBLEEDS)

    DAMN.... I AIN'T NEVER SLEEPING AGAIN..

    MAJOR NOSEBLEEDD

    DAMN YOU CAN WRITE HEAVENLY AND YOU JUST MADE MY CRAPPY WEEK BETTER!!!
    -LIZ
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  • From inufreak02 on April 19, 2008
    I like that idea. I was looking for a fic with Nova in it. Yaoi of course. Maybe with Ichigo or Urahara ^_^
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  • From ANON - greentreefroggy on April 19, 2008
    heehee...yep. I'm on here a lot of the time and your stories are some of the best I've read in a long time. I feel like I need to tell you I enjoy the stories after I finish one of the new ones. *shrug* I think it's the right thing to do, to praise someone when they work hard on something especially when it's very well done.
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  • From dirtygirl42 on April 19, 2008
    This is a great collection, but I find myself wanting more of the Kira/Hana story. Please, please continue it! It could be a multichap by itself and it's such a great pairing. I love how you've written Kira - I like how he's strong but still kind. He's more like a real guy than the simpering nerd he's usually portrayed as. Thanks again and please please continue it!
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  • From ANON - greentreefroggy on April 19, 2008
    Go Urahara! TAke that strawberry! WHOO!! Yes I enjoyed this.
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  • From ANON - greentreefroggy on April 19, 2008
    I cracked up at the last part with the mental image I got from it. Can't wait to see the Ken/Ichi one. XD
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