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Reviews for To save you?

By : yangdragon
  • From on September 29, 2007
    Oops, I typed "grammar" twice when I meant for one of them to be "puncuation". My bad! ^^ ::sweatdrop::
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  • From on September 29, 2007
    Hm-hm, very smutty indeed. ^^ Still, you might want to break it into more paragraphs so that it's easier to read, and check for grammar mistakes and grammar mistakes because I saw a few. ::shrugs:: Will you be adding on to this? Just curious. ^^ Oh, and one more thing: you might want to refrain from using the word "tits", simply because it just killed the mood for me and I don't quite see Ichigo saying that.
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  • From gokusgirl on July 25, 2007
    YIKES!! Please change the formatting of this story! No wonder you don't have any reviews, you're killing your readers eyes with this one continuous paragraph story!!!
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