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Reviews for The Revenge

By : Vampircia
  • From Erizawa on August 16, 2006
    That was quite good. I liked the way the concept was set up. (I love arrancar abuse, I really do) but somehow I can't see Gin capable of 'THAT' much jealousy. I liked the story and a good smut thing, but as an actual story, it didn't seem particularly real. Now if it had Aizen in it I wouldn;t have even cared.............
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  • From ANON - Touda on July 23, 2006
    Ok honestly, it's a lovely idea and the characters are true favourites of mine, but it was absolutely rushed and considering Grimmjow's lines, it played out as more of a porn scene with staged rape, as opposed to a situation between them. Gin was OOC in my opinion, because not even simple jealousy and hatred would shatter his adorable attitude. He's capable of anger, of course. Of that there's no doubt. I realize the reader was set up for sex and humiliation as well, but I think it needs to be expanded to be truly great. What was there *was* good to a point, don't get me wrong, it just needs to be worked on a little bit more.
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