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Reviews for The Playtime Mini-Series - COMPLETE!

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - kim on July 19, 2005
    *drool* sugoi!! many
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  • From ANON - hColleen on July 19, 2005
    Damn, y'all can write well. As far as constructive critism...there were a few gramatical errors...a couple of missing commas, periods instead of commas and a couple of odd sentence structures, but nothing majorly distracting. I'd point them out, but as I said, they weren't majorly distracting...just the ex-English major in me noted them in passing.
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  • From ANON - layann on July 19, 2005
    *.* actually I am not that much of a FF-reader but after getting in to the bleach fandom I just HAD to read som IchiIshi Fics. Unfortunately most of the fics on the net do have a ichi uke and I just think Ishida is not so much seme ^^; Well so it was very nice to find your story(ies). i think so far I liked the forst part better. I nearly laughed my head off because of the "Button Nazi" thing. I so love your characterization of the two it's jus what I think about them ^.^
    I also enjoyed seeing the storyline (I mean in all three together) a bit progressing... the thoughts about what they are to each other is very.. cute. Excuse me but I am not very good at putting my thoughts in (english) words... so I think you're pretty good and I'm eager to read more from you two ^-^b
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  • From ANON - Nataku on July 18, 2005
    Whee! Now *that's* having fun in the pool. *Snickers* And that little discussion about how they felt was just too cute. Hee, love you two! And ne, you're not forgetting about Reflections, are ya? *Grins* Keep up the awesome fics!
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  • From ANON - Special Sake on July 18, 2005
    I really like your work, you seem a lot better at this Ichigo/Ishida pairing than a lot of other stories I've read! I hope you keep going, both of you because you both have an awesome gift!
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  • From ANON - ??? on July 17, 2005
    Okay. You've talked me into it. I'm reviewing on this site for the first time in... hm... I can't remember. But I do have to say that was a great addition to the series. Adds more complication to the relationship, you know? Okay, well, I hope to see another one soon, and make Ishida the top once, will ya?
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  • From ANON - kiki on July 16, 2005
    i loved it. you're doing a wonderful job. please, please update soon
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  • From ANON - mysticdarkmousy on July 16, 2005
    I really enjoy reading your story....I think you did a really good job.....its one of the best Ichigo/Ishida fics I've read without them being OOC.
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  • From ANON - ChessyKat on July 16, 2005
    I really like the way you kept them in character. I've only read through vol. 6 but I thought you did a good job. The only real problem I've noticed is a few minor gramatical errors. For instance "loose" when it should have been "lose". I'd love to see more chapters.
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  • From ANON - Yaoilover on July 15, 2005
    omg great job guys (=^_^=) this story rocks, i really cant think of anything bad about the story...the storyline is good, the characters are not OCed and the loving is good too *grin* anyhooz keep up the good work hope you update soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - Rowen-Silver on July 15, 2005
    Hey there! Still here! Still reading! Still enjoying! (Still commenting!) Keep going! You make your readers happier people! And happier people make the world a better place!
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  • From ANON - Yaoilover on July 15, 2005
    omg great job guys (=^_^=) this story rocks, i really cant think of anything bad about the story...the storyline is good, the characters are not OCed and the loving is good too *grin* anyhooz keep up the good work hope you update soon ^.^
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  • From ANON - Ahd on July 15, 2005
    ^^ I love this... story, whatever you call it, series of one-shots. They're so cute and passionate and... damn it just makes me like this pairing even more. I congratulate you on your amazingly awesome job with what you have so far, and humbly beg for more. Please?
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  • From ANON - kitty on July 15, 2005
    You have no idea how happy I am at how fast you guys are updating this! Usually the stories I like to follow only get updated once in a blue moon... and I'm being totally serious about this. On top of that, this story is not only providing us with beautifully written lemons, but it is also giving us a slowly building romance... while keeping true to the original characters' personalities. Kudos to you! I look forward to reading the next chapter.

    One little typo though: when Ichigo says he doesn't want to lose what he has with Ishida near the end... you guys put "loose" instead of "lose." Other than that, I didn't notice anything out of place. Amazing work! Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - ayachan on July 15, 2005
    omg! wow, i absolutely looooooovvvveeee your stories!!!! so good! i'm happy that there's finally a good bleach yaoi out here that i can get addicted to! but you must continue this story please~ i think it would be cute read how ichigo teaches ishida to swim.. lol i don't even care about a lemon! just reading ichigo teaching ishida to swim would be enough :P please keep up the good work and update asap.
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