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Reviews for The Playtime Mini-Series - COMPLETE!

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - IchigoNoChikara on January 09, 2006
    ...This fic is love... I love the interaction between ichi and Ishi *giggle* and the way Hideki reacted to his new Niisan.. I wish there was another chappie though...

    and SHAME SHAME On the people who didn't review. If someone has time to tell you they dont appreciated withholding a fic as review hostage them they have time to review don't they? people need to show more appreciation for fics ;_;
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2006
    Hot! Not a lot of plot, but I don't think that plot is really the point of this series, right?^^ On another note, I'm really glad that the mechanics and grammar are all pretty much correct. You are fantastic writers, and I don't mean just this story...I enjoy many of your long fics as well.
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  • From Sephy on December 31, 2005
    There's nothing more annoying and frustrating to an author than watching the hit counter go and up and and seeing the reviews go...nowhere. Perhaps it's something that only an artist of any kind can understand, as well as devoted fans. Well, I know the pain and I always review! ^^ Why take the time to read the story and not let them know how much you enjoy it?? I love this story! It's my favorite Bleach fic ever. I loved it to begin with, but bringing Kon into it was like an inexpected treat. I loved all of it. Every steamy sex scene to every playful banter between Ichigo and Ishida! It's awesome when you find a fic that's so good, and also IC. I'll have to go and check your other stories now...AND REVIEW THEM! ^^
    ~Sephy J
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  • From ANON - SunshinePie on December 22, 2005
    HEY! YEAH! I love this story so far! I love Ichigo/Ishida stories..ichigo on top of course ^_*
    you want feedback! this was very good and the characters where all in character i believe! i love how you write it and you should add some DRAMA and ANGST!!! YEAH ^_^
    like Ishida is kidnapped by Kuchiki Byakuya (rukia's evil MEAN brother) and then ICHIGO has to go and rescue him or something! i like stuff like that...but this story is sooo GOOD!!!
    i am sad because I have never seen a Hanatorou story before...i think hanatorou will be cute with Kuchiki Byakuya. i have never seen a story on it...so if you want to be the first
    ALSO, i really love your naruto fics..ooh that kakashi/iruka story

    but yes! i loved this story..LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!
    please write more DO NOT GIVE UP everytime i read one of your stories i will REVIEW And tell you how cool they are and how i enjoy them.so mUch ^_^

    i look forword to your future stories..^_^

    thank you for giving up your time and writing such splendid stories..
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  • From ANON - Nikki on December 08, 2005
    That had to be one of the best stories I've ever read with the Ichigo/Ishida pairing. I like how you threw Kon into the mix too. He honestly doesn't get enough love. I appreciated the fact that you didn't take them out of their original personalities really either. I don't think I would have liked it as much if you made them OOC. I mean, there were points where they did seem OOC a bit (in my opinion), but it wasn't too OOC nor was it very often that it occurred. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - C.X.Z on November 27, 2005
    Neehehehehehehehehheehehehhehhehehehehe ^_^ hehehe
    I like it. And not just because it’s incredibly hot ^_^.... although chapter 5 disturbed me o.O I'm sorry but the entire time I hade a mental picture of the doll o.O

    ^_^ although I like the story and think there is some talent in the writing, you should watch your grammar, and how you word things to avoid confusion. Other than that practice your writing style and find a plot and your completely good to go (although in this case plot-less is JUST as yummy) ^_^

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  • From ANON - Blizzard on November 20, 2005
    I really enjoyed this. Each chapter had something new to it and each lemon was very interesting to read. Keep up the good work!
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  • From PhoenixMageFire on November 06, 2005
    Yeay! I like Kon, I'm so glad to see him with his own body.
    Even though I'm a Rukia/Ichigo supporter at heart you have written the entire story well and belivably.
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  • From ANON - les-chan on November 02, 2005
    omg...that was really cute ^_^ i loved it a lot
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  • From laurabryannan on October 14, 2005
    What an amazing piece of writing! I adore this pairing, and unfortunately there aren't enough stories about them out there, and certainly not of this quality. I was also very pleased to be rewarded with your having them switch positions in chapter 4. I personally don't see Ishida as particularly uke, so that was very fun to discover as I kept reading. Hot sex, very in-character dialog, just all sorts of fun! There was a lot of care put into this arc of stories and it really shows. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - Chosa on October 08, 2005
    OMG. This was just fantastic! Not only did you pitch Ishida and Ichigo togehter but you managed to convincingly squeeze in Kon too? I already love your stories from Naruto, but this just about blows me away. WOW! I think you guys did GREAT with the two teen's portrayal. Kon's was right on the mark too. Instead of dragging on with what could have been a slow moving story, you made it fast paced and a pleasure to read. I loved the Ishida Ichigo pairing but you've really just rubbed in my face how good they really are together and with Kon, it just gets better! I am SO glad you guys decided to expand your writing into other Anime's, especially BLEACH since the Ishida and Ichigo pairing is a bit under represented. You go girls! Nicely done!
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  • From MakaiKitty on October 03, 2005
    Great fic! Thanks for sharing. *much love*
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  • From ANON - MagicWhiteLady on September 28, 2005
    Hey rthere!
    I jsut finished reading the palytime miniseries from start to finish! And let's jstu say I liekd what I read ^.~ THe realationships were well thought out, charaters well portrayed, and the sex was steam. My only regret was here was not more *ppout* I'd love to see a -longer- stroy abotu that trio... it's not often you see a threesome protrayed this well!! One last hting, I love how you made the efection and love very subtle, it was a great way to make thigns romantic without being horridly cliche and predictable.. for once it's not being shoved inthe face btu rather hinted at, ^.~ Us smart readers can put 2 and 2 together *sniggers*
    Anyeays, I'll be keeping an eye on you guys. and I'm looknig forward to mroe yummy bleachy acttion!
    I read in one of the author's notes that you do Naruto fiction too o.o is it jstu sasunaru or other pairings too?
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  • From ANON - Himemiya on September 08, 2005
    I've commented before, but I have to again. This story is so good, I've come back to read it several times. And linked to all my friends. And told them how there's this story that has Ichigo x Ishida x Kon in Ichigo's body, and they make it work SO WELL.

    Please write more! I love your take on Ichigo and Ishida relationship!
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  • From ANON - mini ishida on August 29, 2005
    i liked the story
    a lot (not into 3 ways) but who cares!!!
    sorry that i didn't review up till now
    but i don't like reviewing till the end

    Sorry bout that

    N e wayz your(s) story Rocks


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