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Reviews for Body Shock

By : frozenkisses
  • From Jimaine on October 14, 2005
    okays! Finally finished it hehe. Can i jsut first of all say wow, yeah definitly wow. I like how you drew it out and didn't have everyone screwing eachother right from the begining, aswomage. Ohh and then the fact that it was Kon, so never thought of that idea! I mean wow, and just so you know if i had thought about it i would have dismestied instantly as imposibal. But you did it in a way that i could totaly belive. I mean wraped up in the heat of the moment like that she had no reasion to belive it wasn't Ichigo i mean yeah, plus she trusted Kon and probaly never thought he would do somthing like that. Ohh and he didn't glomb her which really is the only way she can tell that Kon is Kon ya know. Like when he saved her from that hollow she was all like "...Ichigo..." She didn't realize it was Kon untill he tried to molest her. So yeah really liked it, other things i liked...eto...ok i liked how you had Kon calling her Nee-San because he always does and it was a really nice touch. How when Ichigo was remembering Kon saving the ants, i liked that you used the Manga version and not the version in the anime were he was saving the kids. The ants really spelled out Kon's personalitly that much better. Ohh specing of Kon's personalioty, Dead on, absolutly 100% dead on i though. He had the angery winning clingingy bitch and moan aspect but he also had his soft i care about things side, which ofen gets over looked so dead on there. Now the lemons, really reall good! I loved how you did the title "When life gives you lemons, make lemonade"! It was really funny i saw that and i was like is that a play on Lemon=sex in the fan fic world so i actully jumped ahead to see and i was like yup i new it very clever i have to say and so fitting lol. It is like ahh this chapter had sex and it is also kinda like Kon making the best of the situatiion yah know Rukia is giving him a lemon so he's gonna make that lemonaid hehe! Absolutly exalent writting there, alot of times people are just blaa blaa sex blaa cock blaa ahh more sex bla, but your stuff was really good and the thoughts and stuff intemeixt Awsome Possom. I liked the last lemon when Ichigo was finaly inside her and he was getting all angery and everything and Rukia pulled him back to her and she held him. I was just like awwww soo sweet Warm anf Fuzzy WARM AND FUZZY!!! And i loved Kon worring about if Ichigo was well indoued or not, that was great LOL! I laughed my ass off it was awsome! ANd then when Chad walked in to see them cuddling and just like looked at them and then Ichigo sleeply looked over his shoulder at chad and was oro and chad was just like ok bye and closed the door wiht out a word, i could totaly see that in my head!!! Then i liked how you had an extra little end chapter wrapping things up, i hate it when stories just end, it suckes massavily so yeah goodona for that. My favirt part/line would denitly have to be when Rukia was talking with the girls right and they were all like i thought you said you guys were just friends and then Rukia responds with "It seems that...He is now more than a friend." I could so just see her goffy acting smile and sparklies and sutff. I was like Awsome! Hehe ok that's about all i've got to say so yeah, you are absolutly awsome Sensei!!! Please write more yummy bleach stuff so i can read it! Loves you very much and gives you coocikes!!!
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  • From ANON - quirkyslayer on October 03, 2005
    This is a great story! I love it! So hot and romantic. It's totally going on my Favorites!
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  • From ANON - Digital Siren on September 29, 2005
    ahhh! ^__^ SO GOOD. I'm such an IchiRuki fangirl and so I was so happy to read this and see them characterized so well. Especially Ichigo. Urahara as a matchmaker...genius. And the lemon scenes were superb. I just wish there had been a little bit more development between Ishida and Orihime, but this story was about Ichigo and Rukia, so it makes sense.

    *clap clap* I applaud you.
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  • From ANON - Saico on September 21, 2005
    I thought this was a great story.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on September 14, 2005
    This is SO hot. You should write more IchiRuki lemons, really. This is definetly one of the best lemons out there.

    Congratulations, bye!
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  • From CoffeeGyrl on September 07, 2005
    I just had to put this on my recomended reading list. This was beautifuly done very in character and quite moving. The lemons were quite hot and I give you props on how you made the style change for the situtation and mood. This is a great read and very emotional but with a happy ending and I'm glad you did it the way you did. I would be very happy to see you do an Orahime/Ishedia paring. (sorry about my spelling) You give very good motivations to the characters and I liked your lemon style in that Ichigo was all nippy for the last one but Kon was tickely. Very well done you are a great writer:)
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  • From Arafel on August 10, 2005
    This is definitely a nice piece of work. Besides the tasty lemonade, I think you did a very good job with the dialogue between all the characters, not just Rukia and Ichigo. Lemons taste better then there's a good deal of plot around them - definitely more fun when you're cheering for the protagonists to get together. Nice work!
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  • From ANON - james on August 03, 2005
    To say I was pleasently surprized is an understatment I really like the story of bleach and was very impressed about this addition.
    jim from md
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  • From ANON - Mitsuki on July 28, 2005
    I have to say, I was surprised at the turn this story took, but I think you handled it very well, so kudos to you. I think that everyone was very well in character, the progressions were smooth, and poor Kon and his unrequited love... The only thing I found a bit odd was that, though it wasn't really Rukia's fault, I expected Ichigo to take a little more time in turning around, or that he'd do it more suddenly (if that makes any sense). I think ultimately it was resolved very well, though it was sad to see it end as I'd love to see a growing Ichigo/Rukia relationship (not sure how far it should be taken, but I'll leave that up to the author).
    In any case, very well-written, the lemons were smooth, and the rest was very good, nice touches with the friends, Urahara, Chad, and everything. It was great, and I really enjoyed it :)
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  • From ANON - Peorth on July 27, 2005
    Very good :D I loved it, the first Bleach lemon I've ever read, and it was great! :) Keep up the good work.
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  • From ericnebel on July 25, 2005
    Very well done! Had all the elements of the show and the characters actions were on par with it as well. Definately liked Nee-sans self-curiousity of her body, that was great. Had a good laugh when Kon actually took her virginity but was more please with Ichigo's actions to prove himself. Loved every bit of it! Keep up the good work!

    Ps. If you know of anyone who is willing to write an ElfenLied fic on the site please let me know, I am hoping to see a fic of this show.
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on July 20, 2005
    One question, when are you doing a sequel with Orihime and Ishida? This story was awesome! The lemons were hot hot hot. I really got into the fight with the Hollow too, you should write more action sequences, they are at times challanging to write, but worth the effort, and I think you are more than up to the task. You do a good job of keeping the characters "in character" for the most part. overall a very enjoyable story,
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  • From ANON - Hunter on July 18, 2005
    Really fantastic, great work!
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  • From ANON - Aeon on July 18, 2005
    This is the BEST IchiRuki fanfic ever. You say you won't be doing anymore multi-chapter fanfics for a while, but how about some one-shots with this pairing please?
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  • From ANON - dark_Angel on July 14, 2005
    the ending was really good, although i didn't think kon got what he deserved....
    do another fic with inoue/ishida (a one shot or something...) =)
    great job! ^^
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